I was walking through the woods one day when I felt like I was being followed. So I turned around to see a shadowy figure creeping behind a tree. I turned back around and ran. I was scared I didn't know what to do. As I was running I saw a cabin with the fire burning I could see the smoke. I ran towards it and as I approached I heard a noise from inside that wasn't very settling. "NO NO PLEASE NO!" A young girl was saying. I knocked the door and saw my brother. With a gun. 'Daniel?"
The Shocking Truth By Keeley
Great story, and really good descriptive language. I really enjoyed reading your story:)
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